Writing Blog Roundup: daily writing, character’s eyes, write description, using setting, breaking style

Seeing through your character's eyes
Seeing through your character’s eyes

Some blog articles on writing I’ve read lately:


Writing Blog Roundup: thought verbs, 42 tips, about outlines, proofreading steps, life and death

Can you replace thought verbs with some solid narrative?
Can you replace thought verbs with some solid narrative?

Some blog articles on writing I read this week. The first one listed is by Chuck Palahniuk, author of Fight Club, and is particularly interesting.

Writing Blog Roundup: consistent relationships, large cast, 47 rejections, write well, third person

How to write well without losing your mind
How to write well without losing your mind

What I’ve read lately in the writing blog arena:

Writing Blog Roundup: villian characters, scene stealers, draft plan, reasons why, toddler talking

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Writing Blog Roundup: Five on Five

http://www.legendswebdesign.comTwenty-five tips on writing:

Fiction Writing Workshop: Conflict

786038_28568432When a writer pays attention to conflict, she charges her story with a powerful energy. I believe The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins rocked the world of publishing–and the world of movies–because she charged the novel with maximum conflict.

How can a writer maximize conflict in her story? First, give the protagonist a goal. Then put an obstacle in the way so the protagonist can’t reach the goal. Then put another obstacle. Then another. And another. And so on. This is a watered-down formula for creating conflict. In The Hunger Games, Katniss Everdeen has a goal to survive and win the 74th Hunger Games. She faced myriad obstacles: fighting against the environment rigged by the government; other competitors who wanted to kill her; committing murder herself; killing not just strangers, but people she cared about.

Do you know, really know, the goals of your characters?

These were external goals and obstacles. Creating conflict also includes the internal goals of the protagonist. For Katniss, that included the fate of her mother and sister. What would happen to them if she didn’t survive the Game? In the latter books of the series, she also struggled with her feelings on being a symbol of a rebellion. She feared for her safety and those she loved. Internal goals can also include the romantic. Two male characters, Peeta and Gale, competed for her heart. Whom would she end up loving?

Do your characters also have internal goals?

Using conflict wisely can pull the reader into the story, and you can do this by introducing conflict as soon as possible. Make sure the reader knows what the main struggle is going to be about sooner, rather than later. As you journey through the middle of the story, keep asking, “How can I keep things worse for my characters?” –out of the frying pan, into the fire, so to speak. Finally, one thing to ask yourself when it comes to the end of your story: how is the character affected by the resolution of the conflict? A big part of storytelling is how a character changes by the end of the tale.

Here are some articles I’ve pulled out of my archives on conflict:

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